Tag Archives: 3rd Person

Variants

23 votes, average: 4.78 out of 523 votes, average: 4.78 out of 523 votes, average: 4.78 out of 523 votes, average: 4.78 out of 523 votes, average: 4.78 out of 5 (23 votes) (4.78)

*Tap* *Tap* *Tap* *Tap* The buzz and error message seemed to mock his over-eagerness, yet his jittery thumb immediately retried the familiar four-tap-sequence on reflex. His excitement betrayed him again however and another “Incorrect Code” message appeared. He took a deep breath, holding his smartphone in a whisper grip for him that still held it … Continue reading Variants

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Spotter

37 votes, average: 4.68 out of 537 votes, average: 4.68 out of 537 votes, average: 4.68 out of 537 votes, average: 4.68 out of 537 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5 (37 votes) (4.68)

David is a gymcel who has devoted his life to forging the perfect body. He follows his training and diet more strictly than most people do their religion, even going so far as to abstain from relationships with monster girls, believing they’ll keep him from the iron paradise. One day, he forgets his Order ring which protects him from their advances and keeps him focused. A certain hellhound notices, and leaps on the opportunity to take advantage of him.

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Light in the Darkness

14 votes, average: 4.57 out of 514 votes, average: 4.57 out of 514 votes, average: 4.57 out of 514 votes, average: 4.57 out of 514 votes, average: 4.57 out of 5 (14 votes) (4.57)

Orphaned at the age of 11, Feihuo transitioned through the remainder of her childhood in the home of the Toriyama family as one of their own. Now, ten years later, she has decided to seek out the source of her little brother’s nightmares…

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This story was written for the Mouse Girl contest, and also serves as a prequel story in my series, Darkness Prevails, and takes place approximately ten years before the events of Eyes in the Dark. It, like my other contest entry (Uncertain Hearts) was written without any outside proofreading, in the interest of fairness. It may read rougher than my others as a result.

As this story is a prequel, it can be read out of sequence of the other stories. A followup sequel is planned as well.  Enjoy!

#Darkness Prevails

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