A Visit From A Vampire(Abridged) Intro: Journal Entry #2 – 5

 

(Original voice acted by Willow Wisteria and written by Kyle R.)

 

Journal Entry #2

“What?”

The vampire was still hovering over me, her full ruby-red lips in a slight pout from having been interrupted. Our faces were only a couple of inches apart, her fangs fully extended now, I’d panicked from the inevitability of another bite and my mind had latched on to the first thing that had popped into my head.

“I said I want a kiss tonight; If you would be so kind.”, I silently realized I had never learned her name but tried to focus my attention on gauging her reaction and was more than a little disconcerted as I saw her face split into a too-wide smile, fangs on full display. Before I can say anything else she wraps her arms around me and smashes our lips together in a fierce kiss. Her lips were soft as they looked and tasted surprisingly sweet, I managed to keep her from shoving her tongue down my throat when she ran her fingers through my hair and brought me in deeper. 

A few seconds later we separated with a “pop”, me being the only one us left breathing deeply afterward.

“Sorry, sorry Darling.”, she says a little huskily and clearly flustered from her own forwardness, “It appears that I may have gotten a little overjoyed.” Licking my lips tentatively I can feel her lipstick smeared against my own mouth. And after regaining a bit of my breath I manage to speak.

“I thought you might be angry…”, I said tentatively. She chuckles little before answering me.

“Now why would I be angry? Have I not made my affection for you plain enough?”, she leans in close to me and says almost huskily, “I wasn’t teasing when I said ‘I may be falling for you.’”.

“Ha ha, I guess not.”, I can feel the blood rushing to my cheeks as I try to sit-up, but she promptly pushes me back down as soon as I try.

“Ah ah ah; that kiss was very gratifying, more than I would be willing to admit to anyone else, but I need your blood.”, her irises flash a dangerous red and I try to back further into the pillow beneath me to no avail. She leans forward and whispers softly, “Tilt your head to the side, baby.”

I shudder lightly as I feel her fangs sink into my soft neck. 


Journal #5

The day started out normal enough.  I say “day” but I can’t tell when the sun is up or down from in her underground “Home”. 

We were in her bed chambers, with all the fancy decour and red silk sheets you’d expect, she had her arms warpped around me and was snoring softly. The feeling of being the little-spoon was novel at least.

It was the morning right after she’d dragged me to her home, which is apparently an underground cave system, and branded me with her symbol to keep others of her kind from taking me away.

I briefly entertainedu the idea of trying to sneak out of bed and explore my new residence alone, but quickly filed that plan under the “Suicidal” category. I’d learned after the beartrap and car incident that agitating my new partner was a bad idea. 

I tried to roll over and face her, but she suddenly squeezed tighter until her barely covered chest was pressed up against me. She buried her face into the hair on the back of my head and inhaled deeply, “Mmmm, good morning Love, how are you feeling?” Her tone suddenly shifted from sultry to concerned, “Your brand isn’t bothering you anymore is it?”

“I- It’s fine now, but how did you know I was awake?”, I tried to keep my tone even, but talking casualy with her was going to take some getting use to after all of those unsettling nights.

“I can could hear your heartbeat and breathing change tempo Darling, one of the many perks of being a nosferatu.”, she shifted herself around until she was straddling me and we could face each other. She was in some very risque satin-black lingerie that made her bust all the more prominent. I must have had my jaw hanging open along with the blushing I felt considering her visible effort to not start laughing. “Oh Darling, you look absolutely adorable~ Is it really that much of a shock for you?”

“I’ve never been good around pretty women, especially not when they’re as aggressive as you.”

“Oohh, don’t you worry”, she leaned forward and interlocked our fingers, “I’m sure you can handle one little vampire.”

I was going to point out that she was in fact taller than me and try to shrink away from the sudden lust, but opted for a different tact, “I can barely handle one, can’t even imagine what would happen if you started sharing me around with your friends.” The effect was instantaneous, her mouth went from a lustful grin to a harsh frown and her eyes narrowed in suspicion. 

“Don’t get any ideas or wild fantasies into that head of yours. I may have been lenient with you so far, but I want to make something absolutely clear.“, I was starting to see that my comment was a less-than optimal idea and could practically feel the malice in her next words, “You are mine, my property, and I do not share what is rare and within my possession.”

I almost cringed at the reminder that I had effectively lost all of my rights before composing myself and responding, “U- Understood… Mistress.”

The last part seemed to mollify her, if only a little, “Hmm, well, so long as we understand each other.” She, thankfully, got off of my waist and swung her legs over the side of the bed and got up, but grabbed my wrist and dragged me along with her. I tried my best not to stare at the two perfect globes of her scantily clad and pert ass. “Come along now, let’s go take our evening shower.”

At least I knew what time of day it was now. 

 

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9 thoughts on “A Visit From A Vampire(Abridged) Intro: Journal Entry #2 – 5”

  1. I added a ‘5’ to counter the many naysayers. Its good, but just a suggestion to improve with: It needs a bit more editing.
    (she promptly pushes back down as soon as I try)- I think you forgot a ‘me’ in there.
    (bak of head)- back of head
    ( risky satin-black lengiure )- risque satin-black lingerie
    (we could face eachother. )- we could face each other

    Editing fatigue gets the best of us.

      1. This is Willow Wisteria ASMR dear, I literally just created this account to comment. While I find your like for the Vampire series flattering I must say that no permission was given for you to take credit for this work. The author of the original took great care to make sure all was well written simply to have his work taken without his permission. Also, you did not ask if you could use my art work *your profile*. Please give credit where credit is due.

          1. There is a link in the upper bar as long as you’re logged in for “Discord Chat”. It can work inside the browser.

        1. Hello Willow, sorry about this.

          I thought simple mentioning it was an abridged version of you and Kyle R’s series would be enough. But I will be more specific about who wrote the story and exactly where it came from.

          And change profile image if you want.

  2. Typos:
    > moring right
    > briefly enterained
    > up agianst me
    > good moring Love
    > You’re brand isn’t
    > squezzed tighter
    > the bak of head
    > change tepo
    > she was stradling
    > face eachother
    > very risky satin-black lengiure
    > effect was instantneos
    > of my waste

    The characters feel flat – we don’t find out anything about them, including their names

    This is a personal thing but I think it’s best for each new statement someone makes to have its own paragraph, it makes things easier to follow

    Considering how haughty and condescending the encyclopedia says vampires are towards humans, it’s kinda surprising to see her openly admit to liking him before he becomes an incubus, but this is a minor thing

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